*Another collaboration with the amazing Biko (in italics), a poet who effortlessly pens profound verses with simplicity. I loved doing this. Thank you HB for these rains during a dry spell.
there was a recklessness
to the blow
of the wind.
a fierceness
to the sway
of the trees.
a harshness
to the pour
of the rain.
a way the night
lived in its own rebellion.
there was serenity albeit
in the darkness of the night
a grace
to the shying
of the moon
a wisdom in
the way the skies burst open
buckled hearts
to usher in
a gust of purified breath
to wash away the stains
from stubborn minds.
©Hudson Biko & Nandita Manan Yata Sept 2018
An incredibly powerful piece, amazing imagery, well done to the two of you.
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Thanks so much, Ivor. 😊
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Well done both of you. Lovely collab. Keep it up.
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Thank you so much
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welcome Nandita
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A beautiful collab…and the last part when you have to say “to wash away the stains
from stubborn minds.”…
Made me smile..😊
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I quite like it myself 😉
Thank you Mich 😊
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Superb! Evocative Images conjured in tandem. 👍😘
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Thank you my dear. Where’s the hugs?
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😳 Hugs? Testing to see if you will miss them. Always Loving Hugs. 💕💕😘😘
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😳 Testing to see if you would miss them. Always Loving Hugs. 💕💕😘😘
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Wow! This was really a stunning duet between the two of you. Reading this was almost like watching a stop action photo array. Masterful!! You guys work great together!! Bellissimo!!!
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Had missed your bellissimo! 😊
Thank you Chuck for your wonderful compliment. I’m sure Biko will appreciate it as much as i did.
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Ha! Not as much as I have missed you and your words!! This is a super piece!!!
xoxoxo
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you dear
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Always a pleasure to share your great words with followers!!!
xoxoxo
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An amazingly beautiful collaboration speaking of the two opposite effect of the storms.
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Precisely, perception! Thank you Megha, you are a wonderful reader.
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Your collaborations are always beautiful.You choose them wisely.
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Beautiful collaboration!❤️ I love the way you both ended your parts.
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Thanks a lot. ❤️
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Another wonderful fusion of like minds!
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Thanks a lot.
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I bow down to my royal highness 🙌🙌
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Such a dynamic collaboration from both of you.
This whole poem is gold and pure praise. 🙂
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Exquisitely in sync, both halves!
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Thanks K
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